Loved so much of the imagery here, but my favorite thing was the voice of Annamarie - I don't know precisely where/when this was set by something about the way she talks gives me American Appalachia at a time when things should have progressed further than they have. Excellent work!
Whoa. This was gorgeous and gutting. The tone sits somewhere between a ghost story and a prayer that’s been left to rot—like southern gothic with teeth.
Now that's what I call a ghost story! This was beautifully done and feels as much as a cautionary tale as anything else! I'm glad Pammy was able to help her sister, and the others, find peace.
Loved so much of the imagery here, but my favorite thing was the voice of Annamarie - I don't know precisely where/when this was set by something about the way she talks gives me American Appalachia at a time when things should have progressed further than they have. Excellent work!
I was aiming for a bit of a rural Pennsylvania mid 1900’s tone, so I’m glad it came through! Thank you so much for reading!
I love how whimsical this felt despite it being a ghost story. The twist was done so well! Poor Annamarie.
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This is perfect.
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Whoa. This was gorgeous and gutting. The tone sits somewhere between a ghost story and a prayer that’s been left to rot—like southern gothic with teeth.
Ahh thank you 🥰
This is such a strong story; loved it! 🖤
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Awesome Story! Loved it. The twist at the end was well foreshadowed and well executed.
Thank you! 😊
Now that's what I call a ghost story! This was beautifully done and feels as much as a cautionary tale as anything else! I'm glad Pammy was able to help her sister, and the others, find peace.